Wow I really like white black background for the crowd but I can’t see our hero well in this background, is it just me? As for the wording, I would try making use of the background space and distribute each word into those such that the order is from top to bottom and from left to right to direct the viewer on the order of words.
Duly noted - and, agree. I also thought he had faded away a bit prematurely... Still not quite right with the placement of the words, but thinking that with today's effort we have maybe a) solved the disappearing dude problem and b) made the 'story' a bit more interesting by adding the third/blue background guy in... Three is a better number, anyway. Thank you for stopping by and your thoughtful comment :)
I'll wait for tomorrow ... Love your progress and the commentary on the process of creating.
Definitely messy... but, the current version is an improvement for sure. Glad you are enjoying peeking over my shoulder :) Thanks for stopping by!
Wow I really like white black background for the crowd but I can’t see our hero well in this background, is it just me? As for the wording, I would try making use of the background space and distribute each word into those such that the order is from top to bottom and from left to right to direct the viewer on the order of words.
Duly noted - and, agree. I also thought he had faded away a bit prematurely... Still not quite right with the placement of the words, but thinking that with today's effort we have maybe a) solved the disappearing dude problem and b) made the 'story' a bit more interesting by adding the third/blue background guy in... Three is a better number, anyway. Thank you for stopping by and your thoughtful comment :)